55 Flash Fiction - Tim & Sal #27
Tim: "OK, I've been looking at it wrong. All things considered, I guess it could be worse."
Sal: "Its not that you've looked at anything wrong, just that your eyes have become accustomed to brightness. Now that things aren't as bright, you need to give your eyes a chance to open again."
Labels: 55, 55 Flash Fiction Friday, human, Tim and Sal, Writing
posted by Charles @ 12:01 AM
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8 Comments:
This is wonderfully insightful, elaborating how vision can be relative to brightness and darkness. I love the pun on the word bright. It tells the tale of a whole era,of contemporary times!
Very Well done!
This has a hidden depth. So often how we see the world needs to be adjusted.
Mona,
Thanks, I'm not certain about your referral to a pun, but it is about today and the recent past.(~50 yrs?)
Anthony,
God is giving me an attitude adjustment, are you getting anything of value, too?
Outstanding. I really like this.
Beautiful. I just love it.
I challenge YOU all people of the blogsphere to take part in this my own Logo Rallye and write something between 100-120 words (No more, no less!): it can be anything, from a short story, a poem, a dragonquiddle (?)...
These are the NINE compulsory words to be included and which, of course I've taken at random:
> ash, convince, mild, orchid, peace, persist, valley, instrument, roll <
GOOD LUCK- please SEND THEM TO Dulce Rosales
Pheromone Girl,
Thanks.
Dulce Rosales,
Thanks to you, also.
BTW, it would be nice if you would tell folks where to send to, your profile has no email address and you have far too many blogs to search for it on.
Oh, my mistake, those were blogs you follow.
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