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Friday, November 16, 2007

55 Flash Fiction Friday #4 Bonus

Try, try, try,
Never should you try,
But, you may ask "Why?"
Because you must do, you must complete.
Cessation without completion is an excuse "Well, I tried."
"My efforts fried."
Just won't cut it, because you tried.
"I will", "I did." Much more than tried.
Count towards a complete life before you have died.

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At Friday, November 16, 2007 at 11:59:00 AM EST, Blogger Queenie $visitorIP said...

We all want that don't we?
Great 55.

At Friday, November 16, 2007 at 12:11:00 PM EST, Blogger Charles $visitorIP said...

I think we all want it, and I think we are much more dependable with it also.

At Friday, November 16, 2007 at 12:38:00 PM EST, Blogger MONA $visitorIP said...

That is so inspirational! Thanks for that! It is so special!

At Friday, November 16, 2007 at 1:53:00 PM EST, Blogger Akelamalu $visitorIP said...

Always better to say you did more than just try!

At Saturday, November 17, 2007 at 9:52:00 AM EST, Blogger Top cat $visitorIP said...

This was like Yoda's wisdom, I like it.:)

At Saturday, November 17, 2007 at 10:13:00 AM EST, Blogger Charles $visitorIP said...

Its more like advice to whoever will take it.

Yes, and it makes your promises to change much more firm, both to those who need to see it, and to yourself when you may need it most.

The idea had to be taught to me. So in a way its wisdom learned because of the life I've lived.

At Sunday, November 18, 2007 at 10:43:00 PM EST, Blogger G-Man $visitorIP said...

You done good son!
Real Good...Galen

At Wednesday, November 21, 2007 at 12:32:00 PM EST, Blogger Mona $visitorIP said...


Happy Thanksgiving to you my friend.

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