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Friday, November 02, 2007

My First 55 Flash Fiction Friday *

"You will like it, where we are going, what you will become."
"Just between the two of us, this scares me."
"It will be OK, nobody expects anything different."
With a gentle tug he pulled her to him.
Embracing like lovers, they moved, two together in silence, she forever beautiful, he forever the grim reaper.

* Thanks to Susie for introducing so many to this. She has the rules here, because Susie's the Boss.


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15 Comments:

At Thursday, November 1, 2007 at 2:12:00 PM EDT, Blogger MONA $visitorIP said...

EEEEKSSSS!
A 55 FROM YOU! That is wonderful!!

& what a 55!

One of the best I ever saw in the blogland!

At Thursday, November 1, 2007 at 4:41:00 PM EDT, Blogger snowelf $visitorIP said...

Charles... this is awesome! You kick several of my 55's asses with this! Love it! :)

Now...to think of something for tomorrow...


--snow

At Thursday, November 1, 2007 at 6:10:00 PM EDT, Blogger Charles $visitorIP said...

I've got a long way to go still.
You two are flattering me, stop it. :)

At Thursday, November 1, 2007 at 9:31:00 PM EDT, Blogger Little Wing $visitorIP said...

You rock, Charles!
You DID kick ass with this first attempt!

Mine will be up Friday!

At Thursday, November 1, 2007 at 11:20:00 PM EDT, Blogger Serena Joy $visitorIP said...

Wow, Charles, what a terrific maiden voyage! I absolutely love it.

At Friday, November 2, 2007 at 7:30:00 AM EDT, Blogger lime $visitorIP said...

very nicely done! way to start with a bang.

At Friday, November 2, 2007 at 9:22:00 AM EDT, Blogger Charles $visitorIP said...

LW,
Thanks. I'll try to get better if I continue.

SJ,
This is your fault you know. Your assignment on the Grim Reaper wouldn't come to me until I got this out of my head.

Lime,
Thanks. I've hesitated to attempt these, I don't know if I can do them justice.

At Friday, November 2, 2007 at 1:28:00 PM EDT, Blogger Serena Joy $visitorIP said...

So, aren't you glad now that I'm such a slave-driver?:)

At Friday, November 2, 2007 at 5:47:00 PM EDT, Blogger jillie $visitorIP said...

What an intriguing 55! I would have never ever thought!

Congrats on your first 55 and I am looking forward to lots more.

Have a great wknd ;o)

At Friday, November 2, 2007 at 6:38:00 PM EDT, Blogger Charles $visitorIP said...

SJ,
MmmHmmm. Yep. Why weren't my teachers like that in school?

Jillie,
Thanks. You have a good one, too.

At Saturday, November 3, 2007 at 9:11:00 AM EDT, Blogger Mike M $visitorIP said...

Welcome to the 55!! A great 55, Charles

At Sunday, November 4, 2007 at 11:41:00 AM EST, Blogger G-Man $visitorIP said...

Charles...
You did indeed get off to a great start on your 55's..This is stuff that even I can can understand!...Keep up the good work..And thank You for being so supportive of me...Galen

At Sunday, November 4, 2007 at 9:53:00 PM EST, Blogger S $visitorIP said...

OK so it looks like I never came to your 55 when in fact, I do not know what happened to my comment!

Im pretty sure I left one!

Die young, stay pretty.

At Wednesday, November 7, 2007 at 12:45:00 PM EST, Blogger Top cat $visitorIP said...

yes I just had the same problem. I then went to the new post and had to give my name and password again.
Anyway,I don't know how I missed this. A fantastic 55 charles except it's kinda sad.:)
tc

At Wednesday, November 7, 2007 at 1:43:00 PM EST, Blogger Charles $visitorIP said...

TC,
Its only sad from this side of curtain, from the other side it may well be sad looking back. To be fully restored, whole, complete, never getting old, all these things are what we are told awaits us, if you believe what we are told. Then again, what if what we are told is wrong? That would indeed make this sad.

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