My First 55 Flash Fiction Friday *
"You will like it, where we are going, what you will become."
"Just between the two of us, this scares me."
"It will be OK, nobody expects anything different."
With a gentle tug he pulled her to him.
Embracing like lovers, they moved, two together in silence, she forever beautiful, he forever the grim reaper.
* Thanks to Susie for introducing so many to this. She has the rules here, because Susie's the Boss.
Labels: 55 Flash Fiction Friday, Writing
posted by Charles @ 12:01 AM
Comments: 15 <-<<Add One!
15 Comments:
EEEEKSSSS!
A 55 FROM YOU! That is wonderful!!
& what a 55!
One of the best I ever saw in the blogland!
Charles... this is awesome! You kick several of my 55's asses with this! Love it! :)
Now...to think of something for tomorrow...
--snow
I've got a long way to go still.
You two are flattering me, stop it. :)
You rock, Charles!
You DID kick ass with this first attempt!
Mine will be up Friday!
Wow, Charles, what a terrific maiden voyage! I absolutely love it.
very nicely done! way to start with a bang.
LW,
Thanks. I'll try to get better if I continue.
SJ,
This is your fault you know. Your assignment on the Grim Reaper wouldn't come to me until I got this out of my head.
Lime,
Thanks. I've hesitated to attempt these, I don't know if I can do them justice.
So, aren't you glad now that I'm such a slave-driver?:)
What an intriguing 55! I would have never ever thought!
Congrats on your first 55 and I am looking forward to lots more.
Have a great wknd ;o)
SJ,
MmmHmmm. Yep. Why weren't my teachers like that in school?
Jillie,
Thanks. You have a good one, too.
Welcome to the 55!! A great 55, Charles
Charles...
You did indeed get off to a great start on your 55's..This is stuff that even I can can understand!...Keep up the good work..And thank You for being so supportive of me...Galen
OK so it looks like I never came to your 55 when in fact, I do not know what happened to my comment!
Im pretty sure I left one!
Die young, stay pretty.
yes I just had the same problem. I then went to the new post and had to give my name and password again.
Anyway,I don't know how I missed this. A fantastic 55 charles except it's kinda sad.:)
tc
TC,
Its only sad from this side of curtain, from the other side it may well be sad looking back. To be fully restored, whole, complete, never getting old, all these things are what we are told awaits us, if you believe what we are told. Then again, what if what we are told is wrong? That would indeed make this sad.
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