55 Flash Fiction - Tim & Sal #30
"I would want others to prosper, having all they need to lead happy productive lives," stated Sal. "I would want to be the best person I could be, and if I were human, I would be sorry for my follies."
Distracted, Tim didn't catch everything said - "I missed that last part."
"I'm sorry."
Labels: 55, 55 Flash Fiction Friday, human, Tim and Sal
posted by Charles @ 12:01 AM
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4 Comments:
There is nothing like 'would want'. Either you do or you don't.
The last line corrects this difference admirably.
Your 55s still rock Charles!! I forgot how awesome this blog was! It's Mike from Mike Homefromt, except I've moved. www.realliveman.com
Nice blog, helps take your mind off a brain melting day :-)
"If I were human, I would be sorry for my follies."
Indeed.
WOW.
Got me thinking about
some out of space being
plotting against us, humans.
I love it, just a little depressed.
Well done!
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY
and
GONG XI FA CAI!
hugs
shakira
http://justmeshakirack.blogspot.com/2010/02/flash-friday-55-need-to-go.html
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