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Friday, November 12, 2010

55 Flash Fiction - Danger

Repelling down a free-fall without walls, she fed the line out with the expertise of practice and her pure instinct.
Straight down, without the benefit of a spotter.
She finally reached the bottom, feet planted on solid ground. She began to walk away.
"Did you see that? That was a black-widow spider!"

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At Saturday, November 13, 2010 at 12:40:00 PM EST, Blogger Claudia $visitorIP said...

nice one! i love it - free-fall without walls...nice

At Saturday, November 13, 2010 at 1:53:00 PM EST, Blogger Mona $visitorIP said...

I thought that they 'walked' vertically and that with that line in tow they would rise after the fall.
Its only when that line is broken that she walks sideways...

Brush up your science programmr :)

At Monday, November 15, 2010 at 4:44:00 PM EST, Blogger S $visitorIP said...

Hi Charles!
Very creative, and thanks for the spider creepies! LOL

At Friday, November 19, 2010 at 7:30:00 AM EST, Blogger izzy $visitorIP said...

Heavens! didn't see that one coming

At Tuesday, December 7, 2010 at 11:38:00 PM EST, Blogger Mona $visitorIP said...

Programmr, Are you still waiting here to see whether that spidey is dead. Really DEAD!?

At Saturday, December 11, 2010 at 1:51:00 AM EST, Blogger Stranger $visitorIP said...

I like how you describe her as repelling without a spotter -- I immediately thought of a rockclimber without someone on belay. Then you revealed the spider! Nicely done.

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