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Thursday, July 24, 2008

Flash Fiction - Consequences

Don't mess with me. I have told you, what a hundred times?

You don't listen. Don't. Mess. With. Me.

Its not a complicated concept. You don't get it.

I don't like anyone messing with me.
Not my friends, not strangers, not people I've never met. Especially, not you.

Now, you'll never mess with me again.

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15 Comments:

At Friday, July 25, 2008 at 12:19:00 AM EDT, Blogger ciara $visitorIP said...

wow! that is an insane 55. feels kinda lonely or full of despair. enjoyed it though.

At Friday, July 25, 2008 at 1:30:00 AM EDT, Blogger Mona $visitorIP said...

You get messed up, if you Allow yourself to be messed with...

Like I always say... negative people, like negative thoughts , draw energy from you as long as you are linked to them.

Because you getting messed up is where they receive their life from.They are the parasites which thrive upon your discomfiture.Once you break the link you cut off the source from where they receive their Life . Then slowly, they start dying...

At Friday, July 25, 2008 at 6:20:00 AM EDT, Blogger Charles $visitorIP said...

Hi Ciara,
I was thinking more like angry, as in what someone who had finally struck back would say to a body.

Hi Mona,
Its just a story, Something I thought I could tell in 55 words, nobody is bothering me.

At Friday, July 25, 2008 at 12:22:00 PM EDT, Blogger jillie $visitorIP said...

Just dropping by to say hello, I've been out of the blogosphere for a while. Hope all is well.

At Friday, July 25, 2008 at 7:35:00 PM EDT, Blogger ciara $visitorIP said...

yes, i could see that, charles. it just made me think a little differently, but i do get what you mean :)

At Sunday, July 27, 2008 at 10:24:00 PM EDT, Blogger Cara $visitorIP said...

I promise not to mess with you

At Friday, August 1, 2008 at 10:23:00 AM EDT, Blogger snowelf $visitorIP said...

Well I haven't messed with you in awhile, but I hope you are well Charles! :)

Hugs!!

--snow

At Sunday, August 3, 2008 at 6:31:00 PM EDT, Blogger S E E Quine $visitorIP said...

I don't get it. Is the reader supposed to be dead?

BTW, crazeh amazin' photos up on mah blog, rocketing thru from top to bottom while I'm gone! Don't miss! (Now that would be another interesting Flash 55 if I cared enough....)

At Monday, August 4, 2008 at 2:44:00 AM EDT, Blogger Mona $visitorIP said...

SeeQuin> I guess so! I mean I also think so... :)

At Wednesday, August 13, 2008 at 12:22:00 AM EDT, Blogger Mona $visitorIP said...

Tum ne to lagtaa hai yahin par apnaa jhandaa gaadh diyaa!

Chalo! I see you have scared them all off...including Tim & Sal!

At Friday, August 15, 2008 at 12:52:00 AM EDT, Blogger Mona $visitorIP said...

(((HUGS)))

At Thursday, August 21, 2008 at 1:10:00 AM EDT, Blogger Mona $visitorIP said...

hey bab...er...buddy, what's up?

At Tuesday, August 26, 2008 at 6:12:00 PM EDT, Blogger S E E Quine $visitorIP said...

Yeah, I've actually come back a few times looking for another post. Then again, I should talk - the only thing new on my blog is the automatic photo updates. But they are good.....

At Tuesday, August 26, 2008 at 11:42:00 PM EDT, Blogger Charles $visitorIP said...

Well, there's a new Tim & Sal, sort of anyway, I wrote it back in June.

At Sunday, September 14, 2008 at 7:28:00 AM EDT, Blogger The Red Queen $visitorIP said...

I'll never be able to write anything in 55 words. Love this.

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