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Friday, January 18, 2008

55 Flash Fiction Friday - Kill List

The kill lists were going to be old.
Everything rode upon the attainment. The team was crippled. They couldn't take them down fast enough .
It had been an open door.
Sometimes, the door that opens has a tiger behind it.
He left amiably, it wasn't his fault that the sister company was full of asses.


9 Comments:

At Friday, January 18, 2008 at 2:37:00 PM EST, Blogger Little Wing $visitorIP said...

Charles, there for a second I thought you were talking about my NBA team, the Kings!
Nice 55!!!!

At Friday, January 18, 2008 at 2:42:00 PM EST, Blogger lime $visitorIP said...

i'm not sure what this means but i hope it's not that you're jobless again.

At Friday, January 18, 2008 at 3:38:00 PM EST, Blogger Cooper $visitorIP said...

Cooulb be a good opening for an espionage story...

At Saturday, January 19, 2008 at 6:03:00 PM EST, Blogger S E E Quine $visitorIP said...

` Confusing indeed.

At Saturday, January 19, 2008 at 6:52:00 PM EST, Blogger smarmoofus $visitorIP said...

*echoes lime* Is this fiction...? *hopeful nod* Or, if not fiction, is it a reference to your previous job?

-smarmoofus

At Sunday, January 20, 2008 at 8:55:00 AM EST, Blogger snowelf $visitorIP said...

Charles although I love how you have constructed this 55, I was just thinking the same thing as Lime...

--snow

At Sunday, January 20, 2008 at 5:53:00 PM EST, Blogger Serena Joy $visitorIP said...

The first time I read it, I didn't know what it meant. Now it makes perfect sense in a circuitous sort of way.

At Monday, January 21, 2008 at 2:40:00 AM EST, Blogger Mona $visitorIP said...

compatibility is sure to be sought , if not sooner or later it will prick you...

Don't worry, there will be a thousand of open doors...when one closes, ten other open...

(((HUGS)))

At Tuesday, January 22, 2008 at 7:28:00 AM EST, Blogger snowelf $visitorIP said...

p.s. I forgot to tell you I loved the Lady and the Tiger reference. That is one of my favorite short stories of all time. :)

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