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Friday, January 04, 2008

55 Flash Fiction Friday - The Battle

Swinging the sword low, it connected with the shin of the Pirate, and nearly severed the foot. The wood was tough though. With a snarl and a clumsy motion, the blunderbuss was easily deflected, while the small figure in black moved in and broke his nose. He was screaming until his head fell.
Ninjas rule.



At Friday, January 4, 2008 at 10:05:00 PM EST, Blogger snowelf $visitorIP said...




At Friday, January 4, 2008 at 10:06:00 PM EST, Blogger Jim Jones $visitorIP said...

Charles, a most EXCELLENT 55! And you're right, NINJAS RULE!...very nice one. (C;


At Saturday, January 5, 2008 at 7:22:00 AM EST, Blogger Charles $visitorIP said...

I figured you'd appreciate that one. I forgot yesterday was Friday until last night, so I needed a subject and your Ninjas rule line was just what I needed.

Thanks. I guess it didn't turn out too bad for an off the cuff composition.

At Saturday, January 5, 2008 at 10:13:00 AM EST, Blogger lime $visitorIP said...

LOL!!! i knew snowelf would love this one. good job!

At Saturday, January 5, 2008 at 10:44:00 AM EST, Blogger Charles $visitorIP said...

Me too. Thanks.

At Saturday, January 5, 2008 at 12:49:00 PM EST, Blogger Akelamalu $visitorIP said...

Nice one!

At Saturday, January 5, 2008 at 1:52:00 PM EST, Blogger Serena Joy $visitorIP said...

Heh. I like that. I'm not at all surprised that Snowelf liked it, too.:)

At Sunday, January 6, 2008 at 12:52:00 AM EST, Blogger Little Wing $visitorIP said...

Avast! Avast ye!
'Tis still a pirates wench I'll be!!!!!!!!!!

At Sunday, January 6, 2008 at 9:46:00 AM EST, Blogger smarmoofus $visitorIP said...

Forgot it was Friday? B-but... how could you?! Oh, wait... I almost did, too. My post was up several hours later than usual, and my inspiration came from looking around my room and finding Frank staring back at me from his spot in the corner.

I'm afraid I'm gonna have to agree with little wing... I be a pirate, matey, and I'll swab the deck with the ninja that dares tread too near.

Great 55, though... for a ninja supporter. *wink*

At Sunday, January 6, 2008 at 10:30:00 AM EST, Blogger Charles $visitorIP said...

I don't think being a pirate's wench is quite the same as being a pirate, somethings we have no choice in, being a pirate would have to be a choice, though. So are you a Buccaneer fan? hahaha.

Don't you just hate forgetting to do a 55? I haven't been around to check out the 55s yet, I'll get there. Frank, huh? He sounds like a weeny. Ugh, I'm finding the weirdest things funny today.

You two can like pirates better, that's not a problem, but we all know that in a direct conflict, one ninja would take out many pirates, and Ninjas rule.

At Monday, January 7, 2008 at 12:11:00 AM EST, Blogger Mona $visitorIP said...


The case is still going strong I see!

Was that the final verdict ? :D

At Monday, January 7, 2008 at 12:12:00 AM EST, Blogger Mona $visitorIP said...

this one seems to be a more impassioned battle than btwn the democrats & the republicans! ( I wonder who is the ninja & who is the pirate there ;) )

At Monday, January 7, 2008 at 10:35:00 AM EST, Blogger G-Man $visitorIP said...

Ninja's and Pirates..
Charles, A very exciting and bloody 55..Good Job!

At Monday, January 7, 2008 at 6:26:00 PM EST, Blogger Charles $visitorIP said...

In my mind, Ninjas won, are winning, and will win.

Ninjas vs. Pirates doesn't seem to be a parallel to me, sometimes its hard to tell a dem from a rep, but certainly not always. Try asking an American if they believe in evolution or "Intelligent Design," or which side of the abortion or choice issue they support. Some things simply depend on the individual.

At Saturday, January 19, 2008 at 6:01:00 PM EST, Blogger S E E Quine $visitorIP said...

` Yarrrr! \m/

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