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Thursday, March 06, 2008

55 Flash Fiction - Mickey's Drink 2

Donald stood over Mickey's body. Surely someone had wanted him dead.

Poisoned.

The sidewalk had already been taped off, to keep the gawking crowd away from the scene, to avoid contamination.

From the grimace, the contortions Mickey displayed, the bloody scratches on the concrete, Donald could tell what had killed Mickey.

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Rat-poison for a mouse?

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12 Comments:

At Thursday, March 6, 2008 at 10:22:00 AM EST, Blogger Mona $visitorIP said...

That's not fair!

Last time you wanted us to think it was lemon.

Now you do a U turn & say it was rat poison!

You tease!

At Thursday, March 6, 2008 at 11:09:00 AM EST, Blogger snowelf $visitorIP said...

Hehehe! Charles, you are SO clever!! I always adore your wit!!

--snow

At Thursday, March 6, 2008 at 11:37:00 AM EST, Blogger Charles $visitorIP said...

:D

Mona,
It was lemon, only it was to cover the poison.

Snow,
Coming from you, that's a high compliment. Thanks.

At Thursday, March 6, 2008 at 3:43:00 PM EST, Blogger lime $visitorIP said...

slipped him a mickey huh?

At Thursday, March 6, 2008 at 5:17:00 PM EST, Blogger Charles $visitorIP said...

Lime,
Ja. Mickey Fin for Mickey. That's where the name came from for this was I was thinking, Mickey Fin.

At Friday, March 7, 2008 at 5:45:00 PM EST, Blogger jillie $visitorIP said...

It was Minnie! LOL....

That is a great 55 Charles.

Hope you have a great wknd ;o)

At Friday, March 7, 2008 at 6:38:00 PM EST, Blogger Serena Joy $visitorIP said...

Poor Mickey. That's a bad way to go.:)

At Friday, March 7, 2008 at 6:39:00 PM EST, Blogger Charles $visitorIP said...

Jillie,
There's more in the series, we'll see.

At Saturday, March 8, 2008 at 4:41:00 AM EST, Blogger Pink $visitorIP said...

Ok - I don't get the game - what is a 55 Flash Fiction Friday? What do you want? I'm a mannequin with pink hair. How can you expect me to understand?
xx
pinks

At Saturday, March 8, 2008 at 9:27:00 AM EST, Blogger Charles $visitorIP said...

SJ,
Yes, imagine the humiliation one would feel even as the body is doing things that aren't willed.

Pink,
Rather than explain it myself, I'll send you here.
I hope you'll start doing them, they're fun to do, and fun to read.

At Saturday, March 8, 2008 at 3:27:00 PM EST, Blogger S E E Quine $visitorIP said...

` POOR MICKEY!!!

At Sunday, March 30, 2008 at 12:05:00 PM EDT, Blogger no.good.at.coding $visitorIP said...

That was so cool! Great twist!

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